The "mIsAle strIki sobagu mIrEmanan", pUraNa should go like this :
dOsA lencaru purushulu,
rOsAlato kurulu penci kosa muDi gaTTan,
yIsEla ninta poDugou ??
mIsAle strIki sobagu mIrEmannan..
( The correction ows to the point that all the first letters(syllables)
in the kanda padya lines should start with guruvu / laghuvu uniformly )
(yIsu+Ela = yIsEla)
ika renDava pUraNa can have a variation too..
> dAsuDu purushuDu vanitaku,
> vUsulakE vUri pedda, yinTanu gAdE !
> sO sO maga vArki badulu,
> mIsAlu strIke sobagu mIrEmannan..
Also..
dAsAnudAsulE gada,
vUsO mari vUri pedda linTanu gArE !
sO sO maga vArki badulu,
mIsAlu strIke sobagu mIrEmannan..
and SrI kRshNa kandadi quotes a padyam from gayOpAkhyAnam with two of its
pAdamulu ending in 'hallu' and SrI rAmakRshNa gAru commented that it is
a valid technique to use such strategies in samasyApUraNam...
e.g. :
bhaLirA bAvapayin sahOdaripayin vAtsalyabhAvaMbu pu
shkalamai rAjila vEdavEdyuDagu kRshNasvAmi vEDkan SubhaM
balarAran varupAdamul kaDigi kanyAdAnamun jEyu nu
jjvala dRSyaMbunu cUDa galgitini nA janmaMbu dhanyaMbugA
regards..
- Ram (Ramabhadra Dokka from sdokka@st6000.sct.edu)