Sorry to be a pain in the neck, but there were several 'niyamOllanghnalu'
in your pooraNa, sir. first, there is a typo. The last (samasya) line
should start as 'mIsAlE..'. (1) - All the lines in a kandam should start
either with a laghuvu or a guruvu,(2) The third gaNam should be either 'ja'
or 'nala'.& the first syllable of fourth gaNam is yati sthaanam. (3) second
and fourth lines should end with a guruvu.
Continuing your thought on 'pony-tailed men', I tried completing the same
samasya thus:
vaasiga nee kurulanu muDi
vEsElaa penci yundu vElaa? dharalO
bhaasilla dasahajatvamu (==> bhaasilladu+asahajatvamu)
meesaalE (meesaalu+E) streeki sobagu? meerEmannan.
I look forward to your other pooraNamulu.
Regards
NAsy