tE: cengu cenguna R^utuvulu maarucunDa
rangu rangula patraalu naaTyamaaDa
jallu jallumaTancu veeDkOlu nicce
dakshiNamuna karugucunna bhaaskaruniki|
pacchalaaranga ninnaallu batiki yunDi
mOsi pencina tallikE sEva cEsi
karma yOga vidhaanamu caaTi ceppi
swaartha rahita jeevanamu muginci rella
talli neeDalOnE kaalamanta gaDipi
pancipeTTiri tama cirunavvulanni
pOvu vEla raagaa, pongipOyiri mari
rangu rangula vastraala naluku cuunu
caaTi ceppirellarukunu bratuku teruvu
puTTinappaTi nunchi giTTu danuka, para
sEvayE paramOttama dharmamancu
karma yOgulai saarthaka janmulairi|
in line 4 of stanza 1 I used daskiNamuna for towards south - is there a problem
in that?
Hari Om!
Sadaananda
> ---------------------------------------------------
> > Recently, I sent this article to 'Telugu-Jyoti' (new Jersey) for
> > publication (not yet appeared in print). However, encouraged by a few
> > netters, I am posting them on TELUSA also. Any kind of criticism is
> > whole-heartedly welcome.
> >
> > 'aakuraalu kaalamu' is an attemt to draw comparison between 'fall colours'
> > and human feelings.
> >
> > 'aakuraalu kaalamu'
> >
> > tE. bratikiyunDuTa mari naalgu dinamulaina
> > vinta vintaina SObhala velli virisi
> > taamu tariyinci kanulaku vindu jesi
> > jnma saardhakya siddhini bondinaTula
> >
> > tE. aakuraalu kaalamu darijErinanta
> > citramagu varNamula gone patramulunu
> > kaanukaga rangu vastraala ceTTu talli
> > veDalu napuDicce patra putrikala kanaga
> >
> > tE. talli yicceDu rangulu naccalEdo?
> > aDigi naTTi rangulu mari yiiyalEdo?
> > ganTu mogamutO patramulu ginisi naTula
> > pariDhaville jEguru rangu konni cOTla
> >
> > tE. tama haritamevvarO harincirani yenci
> > krOdha manducu patrabhaaminulu konni
> > rOsha vadanalai kempulu jimme nanaga
> > vividha yerupulu yagupince nacaTa nacaTa
> >
> > tE. raalipOnunDa mari konni dinamulakunu
> > nijamu maraci bhraantini bratuka dagadanucu
> > cinta lEni vairaagyamu bonde nanaga
> > patramulu konni pingaLa vadana laaye
> >
> > tE. talli nodalipOvu yavastha talacu konucu
> > kaThina satyamu nOrvani jiivulavale
> > digulu baadhayu madilOna gadale nEmo
> > tiivra niilamulaaye patramulu konni
> >
> > tE. bratuku yannadi mUnnaLla muccaTaina
> > jarugudaaniki vagacucu bratuka nEla
> > bratuku yanaga diiyani yanubhUti gaade
> > yanna satyamu jagatiki jeppinaTula
> >
> > tE. aaku paccadanamu lEni baadha lEka
> > raalipOvudamannaTTi cinta lEka
> > kashTa merugani yaananda jiivi vOle
> > pacca paccaga velige patramulu konni
> >
> > tE. paTTudala vadalani dhairyaSaali valeno
> > monDidanamunu maanani mUrkhu valeno
> > parama pisinaari tanamunna lObhi valeno
> > haritamunu viiDakunDe patramulu konni
> >
> > tE. gaDuvu miiri taaraaDu vaari vale gaaka
> > krotta vaariki cOTicci gauravamugaa
> > naDDu tolageDu nijamaina pedda vOle
> > konni yaaku lUdaana hundaanu telipe
> >
> > tE. puTTinadi modalugoni yiinaaTi varaku
> > taamonarcina panulaku tRpti jendi
> > dhanya jiivana bhaavana bonde nanaga
> > murise panDu baccalini batramulu konni
> >
> > mari koddi kaalamunaku,
> >
> > * * * * * * *
> >
> > tE. kashTa sukhamula yanubhava bhEdamunna
> > heccu daggula tEDaalu yenni yunna
> > kaaladharmamunaku yellarokaTe yanaga
> > raali paDiyunDe yaakulu nEla miida
> >
> > tE. bratiki nannaaLlu bhaavamu lenni yunna
> > raalina pidapa navi yella yEmi yaUno
> > yeruga revvaru jagatini yinta varaku
> > migilinaTTi vaaralakunna digulu dappa
> >
> > tE. cEdu gatamunaku vagaci kOlukonucu
> > tiiyadanamunu bratukuna dirigi pondu
> > taruNa maaSinci jUceDu jiivulavale
> > aakuraalina ceTlaTa vEci yunDe
> >
> > ____________________________________________________
> >
> > With excuses to the knowledgeable people,
> >
> > jEguru rangu= Reddish brown; pingaLa varNamu=Faded yellow;
> > tiivra niilamu=Dark blue; pacca pacca= Bright yellow;
> > Udaa= Violet; panDu baccali= purple.
> >
> > With regards,
> >
> >
> > Prabhakar Vissavajjhala, Ph.D.
> > Fishberg Research Center for Neurobiology
> > Mt. Sinai School of medicine
> > New York, NY 10029
> >
>
>
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> "WHAT YOU HAVE IS HIS GIFT TO YOU, AND WHAT YOU DO WITH WHAT YOU HAVE IS YOUR
> GIFT TO HIM"- SWAMI CHINMAYANANDA
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> K. Sadananda, Code 6323
> Naval Research Laboratory
> Washington D.C. 20375
>
> Voice Phone: (202)767-2117
> FAX: (202)767-2623
> email:sadananda@anvil.nrl.navy.mil
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"WHAT YOU HAVE IS HIS GIFT TO YOU, AND WHAT YOU DO WITH WHAT YOU HAVE IS YOUR
GIFT TO HIM"- SWAMI CHINMAYANANDA
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K. Sadananda, Code 6323
Naval Research Laboratory
Washington D.C. 20375
Voice Phone: (202)767-2117
FAX: (202)767-2623
email:sadananda@anvil.nrl.navy.mil